awsome remix dude
love your remix
i think you have somthing here
i loved the beet. since your not done, i don't know if your ganna add more vocals yet, but it would be a very good idea and complete the song.
yea still dont kno what ima do yet
but im thnkin bout droppin a verse
it seemed like there was somthing missing
you got a nice beet, but you need to have better melody's, in fact, the only time i really herd it was at the end. i have a hard time coming up with melody often
Thank you for your comment it is dually appreciated sometimes when you are producing you only like certain parts and then you only want to hear those parts and share those parts also in divination that is you are listening to the music and you might go along and hear something you haven't been hearing previously.
i liked your intro, and the melody's a lot and i rely liked the ending, where everything stoped, and then it played the melody one more time. i cant think of any major thing to say was bad about your song. it sounds very professional
your loop is realy short
3 seconds, eaven for a loop is realy small try making it longer and more complicated
you know your stuff
this was very good, i don't listen to ambient much, but this was quite good.
glad you liked it
this was pretty good, the only thing that i could say that i think needs to be changed is the intro, if you had it where it played the drums a little bit more, and then had the melody fade in like 3 seconds after, the end wasn't too special ether. but i think the melody was great, for me, i always have problems coming up with melodys, yours made it sound like it was from a flash game. keep up the good work, ill come back and listen to what you have later next week.
it wasnt bad
but it wasnt very good. i how it sounded evil and dark, but you needed to change things up a bit, it repeated the same things over and over, i liked the vocals too, but if i was making it, i would have experimented with turning the volume of them down and seeing how it sounds then (thats just me)
Hmmm, I guess one could argue that it's repetitive, but I'd rather have a few melodies that are good than a bunch and only a handful are good. And a lot of ambient or industrial stuff like this repeats often.
would be better
i like it, but i think it would be a lot better if the melody didn't "vibrate as much"
ok, there are a few major things wrong
first off, you need to tone down the bass a little, then like B-RadGfromOV said, many of the notes are out of tune. if you fixed this and re submitted this, it would probably get a higher score.
yeah your right, i never looked it over that well i guess..
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